Corbayne's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Battle Royal 001]

Intresante'

Mad props, sir. Haven't experienced a good feel from a sprite based flick in a good long while. Just a few things:
-The text: I found that it took away from the flow of the movie at points. Because, as you said, some work is needed in the text speed, consider either not using as much text and substituting actions to make the message or voice-overing here and there. Newgrounds people are more than happy to send you mp3 files of vocalism for you movies. It's just a little something I think would boost your overall image, because, believe me, your talent is great.
-Sound bites: Repititious sword clangs are so agitating to listen to. Even if there was a blend of two different sounds, it would help the audibility attraction of this peice so much.

Those are just a few little things I noticed. Now, I am not in any way speaking from a superiority viewpoint. I cannot even claim to say I know anything about what you do via sprite maliation and it's usage in flash or anything truly special about flash in general. I have never created a submission to NG or any site on the web. I am a complete third party just stating things I would change IF I knew how.. Lol

Much love man. Great submit, excellent blend of media characters. Looking forward to following the series.

Rylumin responds:

Thanks for the advice. ^^ In the next episode, I'm going to try to make it so the viewer is the one that controls the text speed. (Gotta read up on my coding) And I know about the repetitious sword clashing. -_-" I had another clashing sound, but it just didn't fit. Very helpful though. ^^

[Robotic Octopus Snowman]

Wow.

When the psycosis of a force forged deep beneath the Red Planet is corrupted in toxic polarities, a being spawns that thinks the path that you do, sir. Good work.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

wat